Monday, March 13, 2006

Solitude

Like bubbles inside a glass
It stays
Ugly and freckled

Like a little pop
It goes off
Sudden and unnoticed

Like a still mug
It stands
Half empty yet alluring

15 comments:

s! said...

sounds like someone's been drinking! ;-)

Zii said...

it is best when it is sudden and unnoticed.Alluring maybe because it is still fizzy.

Eastmancolour said...

how do u get these?

boy! *shakes his head*

daymn! awesome :)

alice said...

nice......hmmm....

Eastmancolour said...

Happy Holi you ! :)

jim said...

so true.

Anonymous said...

Heiii..

thanx to land on my blog ....
& ya you hv a damm poetic sence..
nice poems....the 2 Iv read..
1st one is tough for me
roy

the Monk said...

nice...seriously, how do you get these?

A Hairy Snail said...

Solitude and bubbles in a glass. Nice Combo.

SmartOxymoron said...

A good pint of better.

Been a while since I played CS. Been a while since anyone killed me. Been a while, hasnt it?

Bonatellis said...

so what is it :)

tarun said...

nice poem.

wendigo said...

@bonatellis - read title!

@thetis - wow! lovely flowy simple

raven said...
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sanity_sucks said...

definitely one of the drunken musings... what say ;)